nightlife in my brain
has a distinct character
for example,
the sensual pleasures
of still lights
could turn me on
but my personal style includes
avoiding stupid mistakes
for example,
at significant rapids
I pull off the life
and scout my route
searching for words
that weren’t frozen
February 8, 2007 at 12:31 am
Nice piece. I like its starkness…and the way it says so much with so few words. Nice.
K
February 8, 2007 at 2:14 pm
many thanks!